Editing
Tightening Your (Manuscript’s) Belt: A Checklist for Eliminating Unnecessary Prose
Cheryl Reif
Some good nitty-gritty things writers can do to make a manuscript stronger.
Rachelle Gardner
Another good list of things to look for to tighten up your writing.
25 Steps to Edit the Unmerciful Suck Out of Your Story
Chuck Wendig
Some helpful—and hilarious—tips and advice on editing your manuscript. (Note: Strong language advisory.)